/v brian bryan- nice piece. went very well as a collab. read smoothly, syllable count progression worked well in your favor. took it with progression holding my interest more. the sarcastic tone worked well with the subject matter, and your mechanics here are top notch. great job.
rawn m.d.- i liked the twist. tbh, had your mechanics been a wee bit beefier, or your verse worked better as a collab, i would've voted your way with one or the other present. i found the verse quite entertaining. your opponent simply came with a more polished drop. nice piece, still.
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