V
this was outstanding multi rhyming inner mutlis and all that shit type of verse lol...good shit man you displayed your excellent word use and vocab nicely..your told a narrative that was quite entertaining..some lines are really profound lol..srsly. the worlds worth line and the one after that...sick shit...ill verse mang.
J
man...can I be completely honest...you had a more compelling story to me..well the start of a really dope story. unlike V you wrote in a more simpler form..made it much more easy to read and made the flow smoother. good shit. man I wish you would dropped a complete verse..i honestly think you would of took this...dope shit for what you had.
overall
Mr.J had this if he would dropped more content..i needed more to chew on and he left me starving...veritas wrote just as ill and dropped a verse that felt more complete to me..thats why he gets my vote. V
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