I feel nigma rushed his. It was a great drop mind but that's due to his abilities as a writer as opposed to effort, apologies if @
Nigma you disagree but that's just how it came across. The lines were well too short to build any momentum an while it flowed effortlessly it was way to simple with mostly end rhymes an no internals. I liked the direction you took the piece and I think this is probably the hardest task so far so respect for that. Objective, you went into overdrive and it didn't do you favours. I think you flowed of the original piece nicely but I wasn't a fan of the switch in styles half way through. I personally prefered the second but think the first was also good but again the switch in style
Just came off a tad shabby and killed any momentum.
I went a bit hard on critique I did feel though you both delivered impressively on content but I'm a vote objective cue I felt the effort more in his drop along with a more enjoyable flow.
Vote obj