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Terror wrist · 08-10-2013, 08:14 AM

Nice. It looked complex to me. though, i didn't stress myself trying to get what this piece is all about... But i was able to pick some usefull, intelligent, hidden, ideal info in some lines.

Your rhyme scheme was superb. Nice diction with flow (like u said:)u spent time on it).

All in All, it looked poetic. Its a resourceful masterpiece for ideas.

You wrote this in 2010 ??

08-10-2013, 08:14 AM	#13
Terror wrist Non compos mentis Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 37	Nice. It looked complex to me. though, i didn't stress myself trying to get what this piece is all about... But i was able to pick some usefull, intelligent, hidden, ideal info in some lines. Your rhyme scheme was superb. Nice diction with flow (like u said:)u spent time on it). All in All, it looked poetic. Its a resourceful masterpiece for ideas. You wrote this in 2010 ?? __________________ I'm never level headed,an unbalanced mind. That sent my pulsating heart and dead roses to my Valentine.