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Old 08-10-2013, 02:47 AM   #2
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some real shit here, I dug it. these types of verses come out of me periodically, shit to just clear the stormclouds in your brain. reflections. as a result, to me these don't exist for feedback, not really the point. I could say the flow was smooth and on-point, or that there were some cliches I didn't care for, but ultimately this was just a verse about real shit that most of us can vibe with on one level or another. keep it moving, I enjoyed this.
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