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Old 08-09-2013, 02:12 AM   #8
Vulgar
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Gamblini, cool verse. You opened up with a solid first bar, then from there had some chill statements. The ending line was needlessly depressing, IMO.

Known as jason bourne just fighting to escape the storm...
Burning trees to a third degree - no wonder im chasing more and my paper gone...
^felt this.

Rawnaldo, lol @ your entirely different direction than Gamble. It was alright but overall these two small keystyles lacked chemistry.

my lodge is nice, ride on nothing but yachts n bikes
high speed, fast life; learn from my misfortune but forgot its price
^that was neat.

Cool collab.
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