Bleak -- Bars were consistent. Rhymes were tight. Felt good about the schemes. Flowed really well. The opening bars were probably the weakest, but you finished strong. Some of the rhymes were a bit awkward but overall a great performance.
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Originally Posted by Line of the Night
hopped on namix quick, cause he's teaching some rules for landing.
But truly, he thought Cross-Training was a school for trannies.
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S9 -- The scheme was off. Not a big fan of sports imagery especially ones that aren't relevant. The wordplay could use some work. A couple bars were a bit stretched. Still, pretty good overall performance.
I'm taking
Bleak.