Bleak had better schemes, better punches, with better landing. Love when an emcee brings personals on the web.
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by Line of the Night
This lame couldn't defi death with Knievel great jumps.
Your jump to fame missed and smashed into the eighth bus.
|
Probably best Bleak performance I've seen so far.
Defiant was trying to stretch and felt a bit rushed. The major positive is the imagery. The rhyme scheme could use some work.
Gotta go with
Bleak