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Old 08-07-2013, 10:04 AM   #7
StarFaggot
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Untold:

ya bf in grey seems excited he'll be tastin ya dick
cuz flaming balls on his chest, forshadows where urs went after takin this pic
when i seen ya arms around this many dudes, i was gonna give this rook a lecture
till i realized ur attemptin a 'Reach Around' that could qualify for the Guinness Book of records
this the peckin order. respect the torture. before ya head gets snapped
how ironic i thought u'd be too chicken to battle since u got the fuckin legs that match


the flaming balls was great observation and great line.. The robin Thicke blurred lines could've been dope but again good observation. The ones I've quoted were good too.., nice verse...

Orc

U ain't a test nor a foe. Got no weapons to throw
I'll turn ya spine into Splinters. ironically u gota Ninja Turtle head fora nose
U nvr made it w/ mad heat, the most basic & wack schemes
This pic is ya txt career: how u always been Driven but stay taking a Backseat

liked those lines... Other lines were cool but seemed a bit too two dimensional and not visual.... Good showing


this is a good battle. I liked how Untolds lines made you look at the picture and think wow that's a good observation... Orc's connections were a bit looser ie the mashed ears and mashed potatoes and droopy eyes and old ladies and that's why my vote goes to




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