ok weird battle.
storyteller- you had a dope verse. best ive read from you by quite a bit tbh. flowed really well. structure was pretty complex and the multis were sick. problem though, you did not tell a story. at least imo you didn't. which is ironic since your name is storyteller and this was story telling round. I feel like you wasted that verse since you did not accomplish the task that was given.
flo real- I didn't love your verse. but at least you followed the directive and theme of the round and told a cohesive story. some of the end rhymes didn't agree with me but you do have a different accent then me so ya iono. the story was kinda basic and I wish you would have added another stanza were the guy gets out of jail and murders them both. with some descriptiveness and imagery of the slaughter thrown in. and this kinda lacked emotion. ok don't wanna be all negative cause this was solid and got the job done here.
story I cant vote for your verse it was not a story in my eyes.
vote - flo real
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