this was dope. as far as structure goes it was good but not great. some of the bars seemed a little bit stretched at times. and it read slightly like a battle verse in spots for some reason. but the multis while subtle were very effective.
what really stood out was the story itself. it was powerful. and I liked the far past, to the near past, to the present time frame set up. worked really well and had a dope ending with a message and a lot of emotion in that last stanza. good work.
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