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Geno · 08-06-2013, 05:17 PM

The goetia is a book of demons. I don't know or really care who ars is. Maybe the person who wrote it? I personally though aliester crowley wrote it.

This piece was ok. See you still rockin with the paragraph style. Only few people have the balls to do this. Those who have perfected it.. and those who are stuck in the early 2000's.

I think your stuck tbh. Not to say your content was horrible. But I think your style needs work. Elevate. Trry lines in bar format. Instead of paragraph. Let's see what you can come up with. Its time to evolve bro

08-06-2013, 05:17 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	The goetia is a book of demons. I don't know or really care who ars is. Maybe the person who wrote it? I personally though aliester crowley wrote it. This piece was ok. See you still rockin with the paragraph style. Only few people have the balls to do this. Those who have perfected it.. and those who are stuck in the early 2000's. I think your stuck tbh. Not to say your content was horrible. But I think your style needs work. Elevate. Trry lines in bar format. Instead of paragraph. Let's see what you can come up with. Its time to evolve bro __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*