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I've noticed a handful of really talented but scatterbrained writers on this site, but you might be the most extreme. This verse is all over the place, and I love some parts and didn't like others at all. Mostly it depended on how hard you were forcing the rhyme. For instance:

No one really unveils the inconsistency of such an inaccurate killing weapon
And actually; it isn’t supposed to be accurate, pumpkin
It isn’t the actual consistency, just the tenacity of it

I liked that a lot because the rhymes felt clean.

I couldve wrote any other day, but today is that anyday. Tempo
I’m a silhouetted vexed clone, sobriquet, I’ve left notes
It’s ten fold. Alone in my cigarette’y shaped desk dome. Everyday

I get what you were going for here, but I found the awkward rhymes threw me off. "Tempo" in particular has no place.

Giving this piece a strong edit and reconsidering some of the language and rhymes would have brought this up to something really great. I get that most people don't do that with their text rap verses, though. You had some really great lines. A few:

Now I know how the slaves felt, you’ll say I don’t know how the slaves felt
the slaves didn’t even know how the slaves felt, now you’re saying I shouldnt say i know how the slaves felt?
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Spent about a decade’ in my dress clothes. Ventilating, to the web. Groan
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Oh god, the Papier-mâché’s alive, whoa! Emanating. Just die slow.
I’ve created a Frankenstein, but useful, his name is Albertenstein