This is a really good piece of writing, well thought out... and it flowed in a good direction (iow it didn't just reapeat stuff or have random thoughts strewn together) I enjoyed this very much, and if I had read it without knowing the author, i wouldn't thought of it as being one of your drops, it's much different then what I've seen from you in the past... some very powerful sentiments.... a very deep drop, imho... very nice work :)
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