I got Sik taking this the imagery and flow was on point the whole time the twist of the story at the end was pretty dope Geno i felt like you were lacking the imagery in your story which to me is a key element in continueing to read Sik had me into the story almost physically, Geno your flow was on point as well but I feel like your topic was over used and a tad dull
Sik gmv
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