Your rhymes are very simple. That's not to say they don't work. But you would do well to rhyme less off -ion and -ing sounds. Mix those in instead of forming the backbone of the verse with them. In this verse, those rhymes were the first thing I noticed.
Your content was cliche, as well. Ground your thoughts in stronger images. The embattled writer is a popular topic, so you really have to do something to make it feel unique.
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