[PancakeBrah]

I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders

What's cool about your style is even if I don't enjoy a line as punch, they flow well and there's always something going on wordplay wise. Granted, sometimes the wordplay can be corny and lame if your heart wasn't in the verse like in this case. A lot of that mexican food scheme was just filler level stuff. The first bar I quoted was legitimately dope, second line had a lot of swagger to it. The chips/bow/dip idea was a borderline quotable.

vs.

Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can

Good line. Set up was too wordy, and the rhyme was forced and corny. But I liked the wordplay. You had a lot of concepts thought could have been good, specifically the opener and monster's inc. But your wording and execution need work, they basically read like you thought of the concept, used filler, and typed the concept in. Potential.

v/munster