It's obvious I got a way with bitches...they all be DYING for my junk
You got away with bitches, too...and prolly got them tied up in your trunk
He can't even hang with mid-tier dudes. Against me, this loser is finished
Be honest, you couldn't see a Split, Atom...even with a degree in nuclear physics
^a bit of played concept, but good flip! I dug it
You even look like a bitch. I'd hate to live in this feminine faggot's world
Looks like we're all taking a page from Knux...cuz now EVERYONE says Atagirl
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i agree w/ the site, i'm not solid at text & to be honest i'm just a retard,
^this idiots probably takin da-bait, but because of u no-one wants to see ours.
ugly skeez's, nerds & fags... only ppl seen fuckin talking w/ this skid,
if u see this ugly kid brim w/ confidence he'd just be walking out of lids.
^cool concept but could hit harder
This was a decent battle. Cash, you had some creative wording, it gives some of ya concepts life, like the split atom line. I've seen similar lines like that, but you made it relevant, so I enjoyed it. There was also some stuff I've seen before but your wording makes up for it. I liked the opener a lot. Fav line of the battle. And Atomic, I saw a bunch of played concepts, especially the Doubtfire line. I feel like I've seen it before it's been used so much. The lids line was a cool idea, but your wording on it seemed a bit sloppy. The da bait line was dope. Creative wordplay and I haven't seen it before. Not a bad read.
V/ Cashius
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