[Adonis]

MJ - I liked this verse a lot with the exception of use of topic and flip in the end. sitting at a table explaining the emotions of a man is dope to me, and you did it well. But then simply tossed the word vegan at the end. IDK, too abrupt. Dope flow and imagery though. Great writing.

Oats - another verse with very nice flow here. Some dope imagery sparced through out, good word choice and dope changeups for flow. Tied the topic in better then J did, however it was a bit vague but I see what you did.


Vote oats, close bout but he gets my vote