Enigmas price flowed like water, great rhyme scheme with each line connecting brilliantly. Content wise was strong with good references to your topic throughout. Felt the arc of the piece was rushed an content bit choppy in places but a very nice drop.
Plot your first half was smooth but not great, simplistic approach, to top your content just came across forced an I would have liked to have seen more subtlety an perhaps more creative metaphors. The drop was a good read though an I def came a bit tough in feed for you but nigs piece really raised the bar.
Not great feed guys but I voting off phone I will hit you up in more detail when I'm on a desktop
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Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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