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Old 08-02-2013, 09:44 PM   #4
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good shit, i unlike your first respone guy, am not into the lead on style you have... whereas.. your first line ends abruptly and leads into the other. i feel you could do so much more if you verntured outside of that, could just be me and the way i read it though? iono. but otherwise. this was dope, good take on midgets. had some great visuals tbh. some things vividly going on that i really dug. depth for sure. are you under an alias, and if so -who the fuck did you used to be? and why would you use nwl under your name and above your avy. i dont get it
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