Innovator, short verse, enjoyable content but you didn't expand very much on the concept. The flow was good for the most part however a few noticeably basic lines stuttered the read a bit. Would have liked to a see a longer verse that had some more pre-thought to it.
Split, beautiful concept, fairly consistent flow, and a nice twist at the end. All the reagents required for an entertaining verse. Enjoyed the read, no large concerns come to mind. Felt you set the bar high in this one and your opponent could not reach it.
+1 Split
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