[Objective]

Couldn't really tell who's who in this collabo, either way I enjoyed the flow and it had a natural pace throughout. However, the content could have been interesting if you had gone more in depth on one of the topics rather than loosely referencing them, or mentioning ish people most likely have heard about anyways. Try to say something new or add on to what we already know, something poignant that'll stick.

Keep writing.