08-02-2013, 06:36 AM
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#200
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Join Date: Jun 2013
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Originally Posted by Rawn M.D.
No I got that lol ur misunderstanding me... I'm just saying ur putting a lot of credence in the irony of her overcooking his eggs bc she scared of him due to her knowing he Goin beat her if they cold.. Moreover, ur putting a lot of credence in ppl catching the subtle irony of it..additionally ur bolstering it as a highlight of ur verse
nah i'm not, its not like my verse rests on that, i just thought it was a good example of intri***y, which counteracts any argument of my bars being thoughtless
to me every topical that's good will have a few take away lines (for me their usually conceptually deep or insightful - but everyone is differnt) but what is th ultimate is the big picture, how it's approach ed, delivered, comprehended, and what can u take away.
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yeah, subjectivity, i get that. I just think alot of the writing devices i used in that drop went unnoticed, while i got picked out for superficial shit like capitalization, not very just, that's all
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