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Originally Posted by Rawn M.D.
But man think about this instead of going with simple colloquial rhyming g u could have gone the other extreme and ur character development could have been if not jut as good, better bc it would o depicted deeper psychopathy then just a simple sadists n perverts
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appreciated, but my rhyming wasnt all that simple, i switched a lot and had plenty of 5+syllable inners in very short bars. not an easy thing to do while ur trying to maintain a story as well. wish someone had brought that up actually