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Old 08-02-2013, 06:14 AM   #194
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Originally Posted by Rawn M.D. View Post
See the way I took that eggs thing in that context was the exact opposite lol

Cuz I figured if his eggs r overcooked than he ain't Goin to eat them so they Goin turn cold n that's why he mad

Moreover 'she' has yet to b introduced unless ur speaking on a former victim or spouse, and if that's the case u should have prefaced that... Irony is best executed when it's blatant n clear

also that's what I figured u were doing w ur simple wording was making it colloquial and giving g ur characters personality (I said that in parentheses above and in my vote btw)
well i see what ur saying, but i think thats overthinking it, the opposite of too cold is too hot, so imma stand by my wording on that

anyway, ain't a single line in mateys drop that could generate this kinda discussion, only questions i got for him are 'what the fuck does that even mean' kinna questions, so i'm 'appy
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