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Gazette · 08-02-2013, 05:15 AM

okay ... but if thats the case (and that WAS the case - I can pick out ten lines from his verse right now that were sensically tenuous at best) .. how did I lose to that? I'm just as capable of stringing together a tandem of flowery multies with some abstract, reader-reliant meaning, that's what most noobs do in a Topical.

But I know that, so I went for simple, concrete, accessible wording, put the complexity into developing characters and messing about with the timeline, Shit i even threw some Irony (the golden egg of all creative writing) into the mix, but what do I get? ... "the wording was off"... lol, GTFO man, there's noooo way my drop wasn't better thought out, better developed, less technically sound or less creative than that pile of generic shit.

But do what ya like man, do me a favor though, re-read n pay proper attention the 'egg' lines in the first section, then the 'Blistered feet' lines in the last, think about it, then come back n tell me my 'wording was off'

08-02-2013, 05:15 AM	#187
Gazette Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 186 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 37	okay ... but if thats the case (and that WAS the case - I can pick out ten lines from his verse right now that were sensically tenuous at best) .. how did I lose to that? I'm just as capable of stringing together a tandem of flowery multies with some abstract, reader-reliant meaning, that's what most noobs do in a Topical. But I know that, so I went for simple, concrete, accessible wording, put the complexity into developing characters and messing about with the timeline, Shit i even threw some Irony (the golden egg of all creative writing) into the mix, but what do I get? ... "the wording was off"... lol, GTFO man, there's noooo way my drop wasn't better thought out, better developed, less technically sound or less creative than that pile of generic shit. But do what ya like man, do me a favor though, re-read n pay proper attention the 'egg' lines in the first section, then the 'Blistered feet' lines in the last, think about it, then come back n tell me my 'wording was off' __________________ Mondo Thugs Last edited by Gazette; 08-02-2013 at 05:18 AM.