objective
obj I thought you had a dope verse man..great rhyming and the stry seemed to push along very well..alor of raw emotion felt in your words..seemed a little personal? lol just joking I know you don't hate woman. but either way great writing, had me thinking. one thing tho is that picture...felt like with out your verse ends nowhere...on one side its clever you used the pic like that..on the other it feels like the best part of the verse...us the picture lol..dunno that's just how I felt no hate man..this was a dope verse.
boredom
thought you took pretty much the same angle objective did. sorta of the same ideas sprinkled in ofcourse with your own flare and style. I like the tone this had..dunno felt like it was natural as I read...like it roled off smoothly..chalk it up to great wrd use man. ending seemd was coo felt like it left me wanting more though...left it in the air but maybe that's what you meant to do..ill shit mang..
overall
this was tough foreal cuz both cats came with the same approach I thought..i mean one ending was different from the other but basically the same type of story was told..one felt a bit more angry and direct...obj...and the other felt more laid back still dangerous lol I dunno if that makes sense..anyway. I think ama go with boredom on this one cuz I felt he had a bit more to offer far as content AND technicality...both showed up strongly but I got bore taking this.
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