Connected with Alvin's verse more, was descriptive, and easier to follow. Someone tagged me to vote, so I'll vote!
Beyonds seemed good, but I didn't really hold any grounds to understand most of it, actually I just read it again, and it wasn't that confusing, just don't think it landed hard enough, though on another day I'd probably choose beyond for he has a style that's like an acquired taste. Alvin seemed less ill-intent on landing, than beyond, and beyond seemed a bit more aggressive, but right now, looking outside and it's raining. I'd have to choose alvin with a slight edge
block head i laughed. good karp! laughed.
over and out.
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