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Old 08-01-2013, 02:27 PM   #6
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guarantee ur a deadbeat dad. that's low but i know he's fleeing fast
being locators to my style n in 18 yrs his kid will need one to find this piece of trash
ur chick an ez piece of ass n she get embarrassed when u dining out
cause yall the only couple in history to fit a full length porn on their vine account
plus she said u be bustin early. damn, it seems this goofballs dried up
his girl told me that sticky came more prematurely then the fantasy football signups
do me a favor, get a knife put it towards your throat and slit it right
this dudes so pathetic there should be a ultimate writer week dedicated to striktas life


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Ya drops is crap, bull, garbage, & phony in the worst way
But I agree ya verses should get an Oscar... cuz ya balogna has a first name
Boards is carved, for an ounce I'd rupture ya core for God
I'd leave wood spikes petruding thru ya ribs over an onion like pork kabobs
U suck dick to get by, no planning to make me feel scared
Always blow to get where u have to, like u was riding a parapalegic wheelchair
I wanna meet Mrs. Metts, show her my penis & penetrate her
Heard da way she stares & go down automatic.. u'd think she was an escalator

Food's ya distraction but I'd throw u a plate & still kick ya
I'm bettin' a pancake would put u outta ya element worse than he did Ill Nika


daaaamn, reading mets verse.. thought it was consistent and fresh as fuck and honestly thought he was going to take it. all og concepts.. all quoted bars were dope.. the ones i didn't quote tho were complete misses inmho.
strik was also on point with concepts that i haven't seen before.. the 2 bars i bolded were fucking fiaaaaa. that pancake bar actually made me lol. wording and execution were very on point. annywaaay both of you came out with fresh as fuck concepts which made for a really enjoyable read, but i have strik catching the dub here w/ those 2 kill bolded bars and all in all being more consistent and a bit harder hitting than metts. dope read, and props to both.
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