I got Rawn taking this one
Serpents was cool, some what limited in it's depth and exchange of story telling outside the foundation he set, which was two lovers had a good time in summer, unifyed by a common upbringing and then they waved good bye after a period of choice. At some points I was not sure who was telling the story. Mary, Jason or a narrator, because all had the lead at some point in the verse, making it somewhat confusing. Nothing really was explored in a sense that these characters grew or made a choice...not a bad showing, just not sure how to react because to me it was a bit bland.
Rawns was cool in the sense that he focused on one character and his ties into the church and explored some of the themes that would influence a man of this character...some what common and safe, he took this and offered what he knew. kinda of gave this a "because of this man's resolve, this is what happened" by his last line.
I can see this will be a close one. This is anyones battle
good luck
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