This was nice, yeah some of it rhymed a bit simple, but it was schemed real well and addressed complex feelings. Also it was uplifting, and felt like a breath of fresh air, which was dope. Your word choice also conveyed real emotion, and held the same type of tone too. Flow was on point throughout, and this was a nice read. Very enjoyable.
Fav Lines - "now were winning, the beginning, can be found in roots,
the seeds that we planted, have grown into a surrounding group/"
keep at it man.
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