iunno what the fux that first verse was, shit was just written sloppy. now i aint down at all with that overly contrived shit at aaaalll, but its like if you was talking that shit i'd straight up tell you to shut the fuck up like its nothing.
wdeva, that said, im glad i read the second verse, far from anything dope or mad creative & concepts been done to....death wouldnt even do it justice. but either way, had a couple lines i liked, & overall was just written a whole lot better than that first verse.
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Hope forbidden juice lighten up the mood alcohol should sterilize the wound
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that was coo
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I dont even like the taste drink with a scruch face cuz the effect addicting...
Imma Tell my future kids never get shitfaced ya i know its contradicting...
Sex on the beach got me speakin slurred speach and little less predicting
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again, i cant say any of this was ill or anything close, ^ but i did like that, specially tha contradicting line. shit i aint even mad at the way shit close.
iunno, its almost like that second verse was written by a different person. < there's an insult in that statement, but also a compliment - take it as such.
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