I unno I always enjoy ur sht
its like concious/intellectually dope to me
i like ur word affiliation (boat/ship) and use of homonyms (pride/pried) to drive ur point
i hear what some ppl are saying about informative vs emotion, but in all honesty i feel the tone works bc its structured like a possible buisness letter (lol) like a memo of sorts.
but word, the lions den/tireless/hovercraft was the standout among a bunch of other dopeness. Conceptually i feel u had at least one dope idea in each stanza tho, and nothing was overly complex that it would go over heads, but still spoke on pretty complex ideas...So u did a good job with that, and flow wise this was on point.
I enjoyed this bro.
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