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Old 07-30-2013, 08:45 PM   #9
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Never going to dance again, stay tuned to the oddities’ dissonance
These feet aren’t guilty until solemnly proven innocent
It’s obviously you. The instrument.
Etch graffiti on my vertebrae. Sketching a sketch while it randomly percolates
the flow here was really nice the last 2 lines was G i thought

Drawing burgundy blood on my canvass, paint blushes the murder rate
So disgustingly shy, it shutters the sky red
Underlined by the blood-shot amplification of the iris
this was a nice part pretty descriptve

The eye cannot vividly see, what isn’t visibly shown.
Visions syncope closed. And the sights the imagery’s black sea.
Imagine swimming in aquatic ink, waves of metallic jet gray
Emphatic. Your head dazed. Underlay a set haze.
Cause in sky, I can see rips. If you pry, where it seasons
Through Your Highness, it’s weakness.
this was really nice and the flow was smooth

Just please, try and defy what this beast spits, David, visit’s Goliath at his funeral
Truly, cause’ beauty is in the eyes of behemoths. They’re up high, the scenery’s beautiful.
this is my fav bar of the piece, this is dope as fuck i thought

A musical, without actors. Horizontal teleprompter, the crowd squawks encore
Just a light show of shadows where fall leaves rumble a rustling ensemble
feeling obscene chemical blast grids. Interweave a cut-scene of technical synapses.
Cause this naked eyes, shy. Fuck, it’s covering up it’s privacy parts
Blinking is only half the battle, cause opening up’s hard.
The spoon in silver lining in my mouth is dying to talk
nice ending



this was a really dope piece i actually thought, at first read i thought it was to spaced out but then i read it again when i was high and the meta's is really nice they hit well and the writing in genereal is good, its almost got the feel that its covering alot of ideas but then that it doesnt lol its weird i dont know im high as shit but thought it was really dope, the ending line and the david goliath part was my faves
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