There's a lot of visual graphics in there, but it doesn't seem to all tie together as well as I'd like. I know there's a bunch of metaphors for what this means and I can catch some of them, but some of them aren't so easily defined to me.
I liked this line
Drawing burgundy blood on my canvass, paint blushes the murder rate
but I don't get this one
So disgustingly shy, it shutters the sky red
how does shyness color the sky the color of blood and war?
well, some of it was interesting.
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