this came down to someone not having the time to write a great verse..Flo the bit you had showed me you can write...def had some potential but this verses mishaps are just do to lack of time..im sure with plenty of time you could drop some heat...as far as your verse...great concept, lacked effort., alotta slant rhymes..but good direction. DUDE this was solid like usual. great vocab use and great rhyming aswell...shit man nothing bad to say about this short dope shit lol
Quote:
augmenting growing awareness, galloping across
Her mind, she's wallowing, lost in her unpalatable thoughts
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I mean godam bro...that line is sick.
DUDE