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Old 07-28-2013, 02:31 PM   #13
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certain

man this was dam near perfect for me...I loved the cohesive nature of your lines...man each line connected nicely with the previous and the one that followed I mean very impressive stuff....technically sound....but for me the appeal lies in the story man what a great story...you wove that shit together nicely and sprinkled in the your letters with out effort..no forced rhyming or scheming...dope shit man.


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that vocab is apparent...its dope its there and you cant escape it when you read this piece..you def have skills mang..your story was a lot more involved that your opponents and I felt like you a bit more depth due to the length...felt like you did an excellent job with your letters...obviously your vocab skills carried you through this piece...not to say the story wasn't written good...not at all..but I felt like it dragged a bit to much...like watching a good movie and it just goes that 10 min to long lol...I dunno not trying ramble just explaining my thought process when I read your pieces...


overall.

both equal to be honest..so I went with the story that caught my attention a bit more and that was certain...I thought his was a bit more intense..dunno kept my attention throught out the verse..great battle tbh.


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