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Old 07-28-2013, 11:30 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by Objective View Post
I also got the poetic feel of this verse. Short and simple imo, but to the point. As a poem this was pretty cool, just gotta tune up the grammars for it to conform better, but yeah, cool enough.

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