I also got the poetic feel of this verse. Short and simple imo, but to the point. As a poem this was pretty cool, just gotta tune up the grammars for it to conform better, but yeah, cool enough.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o
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