vote atomic
The end tried.. I kinda like ur approach, but u have to develop more creative concepts..
Some sort of schemes
Something other than just typing out statements about ur opponent. Tie in a punch, metaphor, or play off his name. Try to create unpredictable lines...
Vote atomic
Atoomic u need to work oon cleaning up your wording. Like in the second bar that wording was maybe the worst of the verse
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