The writing tone is similar but the references are always different, inexhaustible really, you could spend an hour with the google search and this Vulgar verse, just looking up the different names/places and reading. You should start including footnotes. The line “Rather than Stone Age, this bomb will send us back to the Simarillion!” has the feeling of an older style pulp sci-fi book. Just seems like a fun writing effort while still being complex technically. Also, good themes of the dangers of atomic war.
Last edited by zygote; 07-26-2013 at 02:55 AM.
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