Though this was a good couple verses. Dope shit from both
Pancake, you went in pretty nice. Havnt read much asside from your topical steez. I see you have some skill here with the battles to.
My biggest thing with your verse is, I felt like it was too cliche of a verse to write towards nik. Had some good flips, but for the most part I've seen most of those concepts done on him a million times (pretty sure I speak for us all there)
Nika.. had some good lols. Like I said, I've never seen cake battle much so I've also never seen a verse at him either. So I can't really judge if any of your concepts were played or overly done concerning him. You had some good lolz though that stole this for me
I.e. rican of text, handheld device, emotional rollercoaster.
Good battle. I got v/nika
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