Meth:
Unclaimed was OK but could have been better with a stronger flip, here oh untold is OK wording wasn't good for the punch, lesson is played, ammo was OK, Atomic Blast nah, got ur 6 was dope I never saw that before surprisingly and you worded and flipped that one really well, tumor should have been the other way round for technicality, tumor/tomb or wp had potential but it's tricky to execute it and the 'or' bit was awkward how u did it... north west nah... ur verse against bags was waaay better... guessing u rushed or didn't care about this one...
Un:
'Bags' lines are all done, you would have to have an amazingly creative flip or a verrrry harsh punch to make it work.... all four of those weeks was a cool personal... round 1/2 is kinda generic but you flipped it with a personal and I liked how u worded it, still hit for me... big picture ehhh too generic/played... getup was a good idea but the flip was just so-so... saturday night fever I felt could have been set up better but the flip was funny and harsh enough that I still liked it... key'd nah, played... closer was eh/OK.... got potential, hope ur participating in UW on my team :)
tbh I gotta give it to Untold as well... he just had more stuff I was feeling... think you took him too lightly Meth...
v/ Untold
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