[bleak]

A wise man once said that text battles are more like ice skating competitions rather than basketball games. The winner is decided by the preference of the voter. So when you come to a shortbar site with longbar, you're not going to get many votes. Everyone sees your verses as bad, even if they're good. Which they're not btw. You use so many words that it takes too long for the concepts to touch base, which severely decreases the impact of the punch. If you were really good at longbar, I would see more votes going your way. But considering that you have little knowledge on how to craft a battle verse, let alone deliver a punch really hurts your chances of winning any battles here. This site, the people that settle here, are all about concise wording and effective delivery. The style that you have brought here absolutely goes against both qualities in every way. You know how to rhyme, cool. Your multis aren't bad. However, we do not vote based on your multis. I, at least, vote on whether or not your punches are relevant and direct. Yours are not.

You don't have to count this, but

v/Boredom