Lol. This is good. It wasn't a rap indeed, nor do I come into any writing on here thinking it is................................................ .................................................. ........................................
... that being said, I liked it. Some parts I felt the wording was off a tad. A tad. Of course none of our writing or wording is off indefinitely, but a tad, yes it may be on all instances for everybody. !!!!!
I liked the concept.
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