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Old 07-22-2013, 12:15 AM   #2
Vulgar
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But you'll never quite shatter the rest of my hope.
I incessantly coax my head to the stone
but the sleep never comes, the eye sockets turn to gum.
Chewed up and spit out like the rest of this dump.
I'm buried by nothingness, confessing to none,
writing letters in Notepad,
the computer fan hums.
^Very relatable, and unpretentious.

You seem experienced with words. A crossover from storytelling if I'm reading into it correctly. Rhyming is an additive for you that you enjoy from time to time. Your focus is on more academic subjects. I could be wrong. Thanks for the feedback on my drop, and keep doing you.
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