Def
need religion to stand a chance, i could drop anything n that'll do
ironic god took 7 days for the world, n i need longer to motivate myself to battle you
Came off a little statementish here
all ya concepts are old as fuck, should just fill the shelves
n if any girls futures bleak, il give them a week before they kill themselves
Setup wasn't relevant with finisher
seen ya recent drops, aint even putting the wackest dudes in hearses
ironic trap does the archives, n the trap is the archives r worthless if it includes your verses
Cool flip but could've worded better
his home is ugly as fuck, hes so poor it'll make you sick to look
so much you could read from bleaks house, you'd forget it was a charles dickens book
Lol good concept
u wack fuck, every newb is even ripping so much limbs
the only dudes who let bleak past, is explaining when his dad touched him
Nah again not a relevant setup
Bleak @
Defiant my fault we both delayed this.
quick key
This lame couldn't defi death with Knievel great jumps.
Your jump to fame missed and smashed into the eighth bus.
Cool concept mild hit
Seen your drops. I'll bring to light that you're boring.
Truth- he's a remake, like the site that we're boarding.
Lol
He acts godly. Honestly, he's not heaven sent, but lame, k?
With your style it's hard to win... with 7 different nameplays.
Ok
The last to a bout. Tends to lose so he's backed wit a doubt.
The last time Defiance lines were hot, Craig was actin em out.
Lol
Hopped over, thought he'd beat bums with rampant keys, how?
Should have stayed on NCs, MAYBE you could champ a league now.
Ok @
SiK or Def clean this up
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...Jah-Homie-(0-0)
Well felt bleak landed few personal jabs in this one and overall concepts were pretty decent.
Problem with def had a couple hits were the setup wasn't relevant with the finisher. Charles dickens concept was only hit that stood out for me.
V/bleak