thanks for the feed, YDK and Whys
Coup- thanks. noted. trying to take a lil more direct route in my writing, and get in the swing of storytelling.. I rely on imagery more than I should
Black- appreciate the insight. this was almost like a little experiment for a bigger drop I have in mind, since I don't think I've ever dropped a directed piece more than 20 lines in the OM. I agree.
Exis- glad to have you here dude
Cake- you are correct
I will get everyone back on a piece, I'll keep my eye out for one I got something good to say on.. or you can PM me a link idc
Last bump
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