Atomic got this pretty ez.... TheEnd... I don't want to just bash ur style or w/e... I feel like u grasp text more than some of these scrubs, but still need to work on always being harsh w/ ur lines... Simple yet effective, and if ur trying to be funny... You want that to be clear.. Work on constructing a good concept for a punch, and then use wording to make it sting more.
anyways... Mvgt: ATOMIC
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